Monday, May 5, 2008

My Broken Heart

Alone I stay at night
Bathing in the moon light
Washing away all the pain
The blood I bleed in-vain
The tears I cried for the moon above
Wounds from loneliness and no love
Asking silence to come upon me
To smile when am aching
To dance while my heart is breaking
To squash this pain deep inside
Till it wounds my tears and smash my pride
I stay strong try not vomit splints of my broken heart
To try and find a new start

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

lobna
i loved your style of writing
you should announce for your blog
i was amazed that noone comment
but never mind
only one comment on your poem
your,you are much concerned with the rhyme
try t get free from the rhyme prison
you will write even more better
thanks

Crystal Lobna said...

thanx alot, am glad you liked it i don't only write stuff that rhymes i have other things that don't , maybe i'll post them soon.

well i really don't believe in announcing for my blog epically since it's about poetry, i really don't think it's that good