Hush little baby don't say a word
Mama is gonna buy you a mocking bird
But it's not going to happen
Because my little pretty baby isn't here anymore
You left this life still unborn
You were drained out of me
Taking the juice of life with you
Never breathed our air
I will never see you again
To a better heaven you went
Leaving me with grieve and regret
I wonder if I did something wrong
To lose you and be left here alone to long
To see how you'd have looked
and the way you'd have talked
But now am left to memories and nightmares
Of the horrible night you left me and went
I am sorry my little baby I never were
A better mother in a life so unfair
I wrote that after my older sister lost her baby (she was only three month pregnant but it really broke her heart) and she always felt guilty for it.
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you were right
Z_Diva pops up like an unwanted spam advertisement or something :D
Any way,I will come and read here again, but mostly I won't comment because I don't understand any thing about poetry, but I can feel the good poem, when it's written with feelings, that I can understand and even like.
I really liked the poem about the unborn baby, I felt the sorrow, and I can understand how such a feeling could be painful for a woman even if she wasn't the mother -like in ur case you were the aunt-.
Funny thing is there was a time few years ago that I used to write poems, but mine where merely rhyming -I'm really good with rhyming :D-
And believe it or not I was gonna ask mom to bring me that note book with her from Egypt to see if there was something in it that would be funny or worth being posted on my blog -though I believe they are all crap-, but mine were in arabic, I have really few english poems, maybe not more than three :D
By the way, don't you think that I'm really self centered, I really hate it, but I donno how to stop, any suggestions ??!!!
hey i just saw that comment,
and I loved that somehow you found your way through, I've been writing poems since i was in Middle three all in english tried to write in arabic just wrote one and thought that it's really lousy,
anywayz I'd loove to read your poems you should post em, and go ahead and comment about every single one of them you can say what you like and what you like (you don't even have to give a reason )
You said "Funny thing is there was a time few years ago that I used to write poems, "
does that mean that you don't write no more?
don't do that go ahead and write again
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